Pitch-

Starring Rebecca and Sophie.

Part 1 

Part 2

In our lesson we had to pitch our music video idea and discuss how we were going to stick to or challenge the conventions of our indie/rock genre. After we pitched, the class discussed and wrote down some feedback for us.

Class Feedback: Realistic goals, didnt really go into a narrative, difficult to do, good idea to film it at the aftermath of the party, good idea - need to make sure objects in dolls house correlate with real house, more trippy themes, interesting opening and ideas, need more typical circus thems, think about edits between locations, dolls house and actual party, need to think about how to link girl with dolls house.

Overall we belive that our pitch went well and the feedback was helpful and constructive. It has helped us to see that we need to think about some of our ideas in more detail to get a proper structured narrative and also think about the filming and editing for ceratin harder sections. 
- Rebecca